The _____
A _____ can show may things,
An evil monster or an angel with wings
And though we aren't always happy with what we see
A ____ is a ____, that's what its meant to be
Some bring memories, others don't
But the one you're hiding surely wont
Yes i see it, behind your back
Don't look now, for it will attack
Because after all
A ____ is a ______, but that's not all
I think that your definition poem is about a mirror. It was very well written, the poem had a repetitive pattern such as ;a mirror is a mirror, and it added detail and helped the poem flow well. One thing I think you could improve on is adding more imagery words to enhance the description and use some metaphors to show higher level thinking when you are comparing two things, for example the evil monster and the angel with wings. Overall you wrote a fantastic poem! Great Job Alex!!
ReplyDeleteI think that your definition poem is about a mirror. It was very well written, the poem had a repetitive pattern such as ;a mirror is a mirror, and it added detail and helped the poem flow well. One thing I think you could improve on is adding more imagery words to enhance the description and use some metaphors to show higher level thinking when you are comparing two things, for example the evil monster and the angel with wings. Overall you wrote a fantastic poem! Great Job Alex!!
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